She « Faithfool

She

was

dangerous

in the way

that all women

are dangerous

but she

more than most

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on June 21, 2007 at 3:50 am Comments (3)

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On June 22, 2007 at 9:10 pm Eric Said:

I take it the shape of the poem is intended to show the kind of danger “she” is.

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On June 24, 2007 at 3:12 am faithfool Said:

Not intended. Nor was any possibility that this could come across as misogynistic (anti-feminist). Such are the risks of short, simple poems.

For a good time, insert “he” for “she” and “weak” for “dangerous.”

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On February 6, 2009 at 12:08 pm Andreuola Said:

Thank you very much – these look great!

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