in the way

that all women

are dangerous

but she

more than most

Published in: on June 21, 2007 at 3:50 am  Comments (3)  

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  1. I take it the shape of the poem is intended to show the kind of danger “she” is.

  2. Not intended. Nor was any possibility that this could come across as misogynistic (anti-feminist). Such are the risks of short, simple poems.

    For a good time, insert “he” for “she” and “weak” for “dangerous.”

  3. Thank you very much – these look great!

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